[Task 4.2]
I was walking around the campus after I was done with my mid-term exams. Because it was quite late at night with no exam, there was almost none. I took a seat near the Obama Trail starts and remained still. I closed my eyes with little bit of tiredness and tried to feel the relaxing atmosphere which the empty campus was giving off. As soon as I sat on the bench, the particular smell of a rainy day came to my nostrils along with gentle night breeze. It was a cool and refreshing air which I had not felt for a while. I decided to lie face up to feel other senses except for the sense of sight. I was not able to see the wind, but to hear it blowing. It touched my cheek gently and softly as if I had been her boyfriend. I picked up the faint sound of cars in the distance and I thought that it would be really great if I could drive right now. Remembering moments when I drove seemed pretty nice, but unfortunately I knew that it was impossible at that moment. Leaving the unfulfilled desire behind, I continued focusing on my hearing again. This time I could hear someone singing from the distance. A woman's voice hit and held every note with perfect ease and clarity. Her voice made me imagine how she would look like for a few moments. She sang for about 10 minutes and her voice disappeared without leaving any trace on my ears. Not knowing how much time had passed, I opened my eyes. I went back home.
[Task 4.4]
1. Holy's Coffee shop.
[Reason]: The very first place I worked as a part-timer.
2.
Sight | Coffee bean, customers, uniform, managers, etc. |
Sound | Blender, grinder, conversations, milk frother, etc. |
Smell | Coffee, tea, Croque-monsieur, bagel, and Paner, etc. |
Taste | Coffee, tea, cake, etc. |
Touch | Ice, coffee, bread, beverages, etc. |
I enjoyed reading about your description of the coffee shop. I especially liked the part, "The smell of heated and fresh Croque-monsieur, bagel, and Paner led to secretion of gastric juices in part-timers' guts and to burning feeling in their stomach." I totally understand what you are trying to describe because I think I had very similar experience in the past. You also used lots of information from your senses.
ReplyDeleteTo suggest for any improvements, I think you can add more details about why the coffee shop was important for you by adding more about how you felt about the place. Also, I don't understand why some parts of your writing in the end are deleted.
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